Well mostly old stuff for now but here's stuff I've come up with. I'm not showing graphics requests I've done in the past. Any criticism is welcome, I'm still learning! Most are small cause they were my signatures (: (and syl is my other username..) mostly flat images..

I like your work.

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They don't really have any flow, sorry

Alright well thanks to you both! Can you go into a little more depth about no flow, RockerMan? I want to learn more! Maybe I'll make some new stuff with that in mind.

Hello NeonFirenze, I am Dawn.

Yeah I agree with what Rocker said. When I first saw your work I was not a fan of any of the backgrounds. You have light sources like camera glares that are distracting, there are brush patterns that look out of place, and the repeating text patterns don’t seem necessary. I personally thought you had an interesting and great concept with the shoes, but then it seemed you added too many things and it ruined the overall effect of the piece.

As for flow it’s to describe when elements of a piece work together to create some kind of unity. When you have elements that don’t belong or work against each other, the flow becomes messy - chaotic even. It’s quite common when starting out that artists try to do too much. They try to throw in everything instead of limiting themselves to what works well in the piece. When you’re in the process you should probably ask yourself – why am I adding this touch or effect and is it needed?

All the best.

not too smooth, and your glowing effect is not too glowing i think, i`m not good at graphic, but its my comment
but i love this one :



i love the cursor, writing text, and arise animation, looks like real 2nd millenium era

Awesome thanks Dawn and experiencesforum! I'll take this all to mind and retry when I have time!